سولھویں سالگرہ نور وجدان کی انگریزی نظموں پر تبصرہ جات

یاسر شاہ

محفلین
سولھویں سالگرہ - نور وجدان کی انگریزی نظمیں

ماشاءاللہ ۔بہت عمدہ پیغام ۔بیدار دل کی ترجمان اوروں کو بھی بیدار کرتی ہوئی۔میں نہیں جانتا زبان و بیان کس پائے کا ہے مگر مجھے آپ کی یہ نظم پڑھ کے کچھ روحانی فائدہ بھی محسوس ہوا۔جزاک اللہ خیر ۔

دیکھ لیں دو بار پوسٹ ہو گئی ہے۔

"sometime you have a lot of things to say but you remain silent!
On times, your voice is scrubbed back to your mouth but you thunder and rattle !
This is how life goes on with symphonies and cacophonies!
You juggle up these voices for adventure or being fearless !
Life grabs you , tightens you and folds you twice like a string !
You still muse and joy over it ,
You remain happy and calm!
Because it is your choice and you made all the things for you !
Sometime Allah gives you strength and power , fame and love !
You misuse it for your happiness and tried to crush others !
On times ,you become god of little things and stick them like a master !
You gamble ,drink ,steel ,lie ,fool like a skilled affectator!
When people leave you alone ,
Call you corrupt and hypocrite!
You sue to Allah and He forgives you without saying ,
”O`man you became God !”
Sometime Allah makes us empty and penniless and lonely !
On times, you are betrayed and bullied by others !
You show meekness and sleeve your inner pain !
You bend to Allah , weep , sob and ooze salty water !
You continue it with unending complains , croaks and hisses !
This is the life that goes with fights and cackles !
You blame why are you born in this world?
The mystery remains unresolved !
And you bygone hollow black holes !
After so much heat and energy waste ,you turned black!

What Allah says to us is very simple and logical !
This world is mine , time is very short !
you have to give the exam,
and solve the paper

The one who controls the nerves either in success or in failure ,
The only one amongst you would be the diamond of next world !
I receive your complains , sees your agonies and pains !
I watch how powerful plays with powerless !
I listen to the voices of powerless coming from the heart touches the highest temple of Sky !
So all of your fears , pains will turn into happiness and happiness into shame !
O` My dear creature !
O `my beloved man !
I will keep the balance at the end and divide all pains to grabbers !
No more fears ! No more pains ! No more
tears !
Just go on with life !
This is just the exam !"​
2013 Nov
 

نور وجدان

لائبریرین
ماشاءاللہ ۔بہت عمدہ پیغام ۔بیدار دل کی ترجمان اوروں کو بھی بیدار کرتی ہوئی۔میں نہیں جانتا زبان و بیان کس پائے کا ہے مگر مجھے آپ کی یہ نظم پڑھ کے کچھ روحانی فائدہ بھی محسوس ہوا۔جزاک اللہ خیر ۔

دیکھ لیں دو بار پوسٹ ہو گئی ہے۔
میں بس پرانی نظمیں دیکھ رہی تھی، ابتدا میں یونہی لکھنا شروع کیا تھا ... اچھا لگا، گویا پوسٹ کا حق ادا ہوگیا ..... میں نے تدوین کردی ہے
سلامت رہیے
بہت دعائیں
 

صابرہ امین

لائبریرین
Is it a piece of poetry written by you? I haven't read anything considerable about Marxism as I have no inclination towards this subject . Many things are surprising for me . Will have to think about reading Karl Marx and Friedrich Engels to get a better understanding of it . . Anyway well written . .

Marxism

The world would dwell in space .
Revolving images would sketch space.
Physical distancing would mount ,
Our Visualization of space .



People would discover new relationships;
Of their paternal and maternal belongings ,
It will be matter of their choice .
The new generation will first go near to ''Apollo ''


The system of respect would be entertained.
But in a new a way ,like the encounters of the God of Son.
All would rear each day,to see glimpse of thy,
He would met all, lit and went .


Seasoning misogyny would be faded.
Raining love would enlighten Artemis wings;
Thy wingswould light and give soothing smell,
Which World would never have.


''Love conquers all '', will fertile ,
Thy feminist-space of ideas ,
Which Keats could never found ,
And lost in ,''La Bella Dams ..."
Nor like the suicidal encounters,
in the plays of Shakes,



Marxism would be prevailed all around.
Austen would be happy in limited range.
Moon-sun tides would never imbalance.
There would be no Oedipus and Electra,
Neil `s philosophy would be a burial deep.

Feb,2012
 

نور وجدان

لائبریرین
Is it a piece of poetry written by you? I haven't read anything considerable about Marxism as I have no inclination towards this subject . Many things are surprising for me . Will have to think about reading Karl Marx and Friedrich Engels to get a better understanding of it . . Anyway well written . .
اس وقت سارے فلسفے پڑھے تھے، اب تو یاد ہی نہیں سب ہے کیا، میں بس پرانا لکھا دیکھ رہی تھی. اک طنزیہ نظم ہے وہ پوسٹ کروں گی ....ان شاءاللہ
 
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